The race a won

I could feel the blood rushing through my veins. When I WAS STANDING ON THE EDGEOF THE WALL I FElt MY heart BEATING NERVOUSLY. BANG !!!  I JUMPED INTO THE WATER FILLED WITH CHLORINE. I COULD EVEN TASTE THE CRUNCHY APPLE I ATE BEFORE MY RACE. I FELT THE VIBRATION OF THE WATER BOUNCING OFF ME. WHEN I LOOKED UP I SAW THE  FINISH LINE JUST ABOVE ME. I Heard MY MUM CHEERING ME ON and I WENT UP TO SEE MY TIME. I GOT 28 SECONDS. MY MUM CONGRATULATED ME AS I was GIVEN THE FIRST PLACE Card. I WAS SHOCKED. I NEVER KNEW  I COULD CoME FIRST PLACE. I HAD SUCH A BLAST IN SWIMMING SPORTS.